Some sprite work! Critique welcome!

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Some sprite work! Critique welcome! Mar 23, 2016 5:54:39 GMT -5

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Post by dastardlypestilence on Mar 23, 2016 5:54:39 GMT -5

I've started doing sprite work because I want to make a fan session in the future :0

critique welcome and encouraged!

fluffycockatrice.deviantart.com/art/Just-a-swell-guy-598376609
fluffycockatrice.deviantart.com/art/Doll-sprite-sheet-598370998
fluffycockatrice.deviantart.com/art/Sethis-Sprite-598375151
fluffycockatrice.deviantart.com/art/Luxlux-1-598373938

and a lot of mini strife!

fluffycockatrice.deviantart.com/gallery/58280818/animations

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Some sprite work! Critique welcome! Mar 23, 2016 14:04:24 GMT -5

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Post by captainlhurgoyf on Mar 23, 2016 14:04:24 GMT -5

Looks good, the ministrife sprites especially. The only real critique I have is that on some of the walksprites (moreso in the last three you linked) the outlines seem a bit thick and smooth, which makes them stand out compared to the style I'm used to for Homestuck sprites, but I don't know if that's a deliberate stylistic choice or not, and everything's very cute and expressive.

I would also add more frames to Luxlux's blinking animation (or at least slow it down) so it doesn't look so choppy.

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Some sprite work! Critique welcome! Mar 23, 2016 16:19:31 GMT -5

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Post by dastardlypestilence on Mar 23, 2016 16:19:31 GMT -5

Mar 23, 2016 14:04:24 GMT -5 captainlhurgoyf said:

Thanks so much for the feedback!

I made the lines a lot bigger because of the programm I use to sprite (it's sai, bleh) but i'm pleased to see that they stand out.

I'll also work on the blinking! Thank you again!

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Some sprite work! Critique welcome!

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